I think I know why it took you so long to write. I'm familiar with that sort of writing style- it's like free-writ poetry, kind of. It takes much longer than most other writings.

Your hard work paid off! I looked up a Piers/Mia pairing as soon as I entered this fandom, and you were the only one on the list. And your story was brilliant! This is my favorite pairing in Golden Sun. ^__^

-Shana-san

I loved it! It was excellently written and you handled the characters with flying colors!
I really hope to read more of this pairing from you! =)

*Snort* You have got to be kidding with that last. This is awesome! Brovo! Encore!
I like the Piers and Mia pairing.

It has been a while since I've read an extremely well-written Piers and Mia fanfic. It was really great and I enjoyed reading.

I've been really sick, so I spent all week in bed playing Golden Sun. Made me crave some fanfics, and yours was the first one on the page. It was fate, I tell you! xD I swear I'm not a stalker... v_v;

But I definitely enjoyed it. Sunny writes such good stories.

I absolutely loved this story. You say it took you a long time to write this; well I think it was all well worth it!
Everything just fits so well into this and it's written beautifully. Excellent work ^_^

Oh I really liked it!
I love how you used the element for this, and in a rather complex way, too. I'd never shiped this before, but this was very, very good!

Not my favourite GS pairing I admit, but you wrote it brilliantly!