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Serene-Moon-Princess
2008-10-24 . chapter 1
Wow, that is pretty crazy. hahaha.

I'm still loving Snake's little comments. xD Oh wow.

That's amazing.
yoailover4lyfe
2008-08-30 . chapter 1
this is just too good, poor guys being dressed as the sailor moon characters especially making them sing the theme song

I was just lmaf you right about Ike and PIt their are just like moon and mars
great job
Flowershop78
2008-06-10 . chapter 1
I love you...you just made my day. Samus is so evil...making Snake Sailor Uranus and Faclon Neptune. Aw man, if i need a laugh, I have to think of this...Sailor smashers...
Anyways, that was so dang funny! Favorite! Oh, by the way. You shoulda made Roy Sailor Mars. Jupiter fits Link. Yay Jupiter!
Lady Chitose
2008-06-08 . chapter 1
Ike in red heels = love. I want a plushie of it.
EmoxJerk
2008-06-06 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed reading that! xDD
Oh all seven of them, singing the Sailor Moon theme song. ~
Plus, Ike in red heels!~ :3

I give up a round of thundering applause!
dnomy
2008-06-05 . chapter 1
Lol It comes to show a everything has 2 sides. It was a painfully work out but at the end there was a payoff.
Molto Alesato
2008-06-05 . chapter 1
xD This is EPIC, THis is the hardest ive ever laughed at a fanfic... can I have a pit plushy?
Anonymous
2008-06-05 . chapter 1
Aww... When I saw the title of the fic I was kinda hoping you'd do the Wii Fit Fitness Test! ... Or was it Balance Test? Would've been so funny, not that this wasn't.

Nonetheless, this fic was great for laughs and a sufficient sequel to the first.
GintaxAlvissForever
2008-06-05 . chapter 1
Me: Okay, I reviewed! Give me a Pit, Ike, Sonic, Fox, and Satoshi plushie please!

It was so funny! Good job!
pastaboy13
2008-06-05 . chapter 1
that was hilarious! ike kissing pit was funny 2. ur a great story writer; keep it up!!:)
arashi-enkou
2008-06-05 . chapter 1
Well. -Well-.

This was so crack-a-licious, I think I ruptured a kidney. Possibly both.

Ah, Samus and that Paralyzer...priceless.

And the Sailor Moon cosplay, MarsxMoon undertone? Absolutley genious. Plus, there was IkexPit-ness and Marth in a skirt. How much more awesome can a story get?

I liked it, apparently.
lugia flyhight
2008-06-05 . chapter 1
quite thee humerous fiction youngone. Snake really has a liking for samus does he not?

a few errors but nothong to serious, add some character emotion and discription. Doing this helps give a story or one shot some depth and atmosphere.
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