NICE i liked it (: very descriptive and naruto is alot more mature

I really liked this. It was something that Naruto would be really thinking on the inside. Although I thought at the end he was going to be all I promise you Sakura-chan, Believe it! haha This part was my favorite though."But I’m crashing this pity party of yours, Sakura. No more." That was just the greatest mental picutre. you don't even know XD

that was well done good job.

Aww! I like this. I like it a lot! :D ... Can I add it to my C2? XD