ok ew ew ew ew i'm an a/j or an a/g fan but eew that was nasty

Oh My lord. I wondered about Raoul's problem but never thought about something like that. Wonderful if a bit, how to put this delicately, peculiar, improbable, freaky. Amazingly briliant

Well, that was certainly different, wasn't it? I liked it though. Write some more, pls?

pleasepleaseplease write what happenes
like explane the sex scene between Alanna and Raoul because i think you can soo you have to
please

Erm... Interesting... Personally, I'm a Alanna/Liam (Shang Dragon
However, I'm a minority V_V So no one writes those stories, and I stink at love stories -sighs sadly-

ok...scary. good, but i think evryones OOC.

i liked the first part but the ending sucks

I don't usually flame people's stories, but this really got to me. First of all, it was so OOC. I cannot see Raoul like that...ever. And Alanna/Raoul? I don't know... I am rather biased though, because I love George. I think that you have a great writing style however, and I would enjoy to see you write something new in the future. But, please, don't ruin the characters!

Ouch, they're gonna regret that in the morning...(hehehe I sound like an idiot...) That was very well writen and all that, and it was very in chatacter...I always wondered about his drinking problem...

loved it! write more, for me, pleaseeeeeee *flutters eyelashes*

Woah Baby! that was great! i like it! i like it a lot! but i'm not sure they would know who sherlock was. _ great story! keep it going

I like!

gooooooood! i like raoul/alanna. i think he liked her when she was alan... hrm an interesting ficcy... :D

Wow! All I can say..

showers herself till her skin is raw Ewwwwwwwwwww. I still don't feel clean..