hurry up with chapter 2 please

wowwee. That was intense. I like it, keep on writing!

hello! plz update im left here waiting to see wat happens...

wtf

You should of have made the story a lil longer.

I know its been since June since you have worked on this but please start again. I am in love with it!

UPDATE NOW!

I like this story, you need to update it!

This is good. Please continue it!

This Ellie character sounds pretty interesting. Haha, just kidding Alu.
I really need to know where this story goes!
I'm worried about Charlie :(

It was a very good story. add more, i want to know how it goes.
BTW, i don't like ur title, i am a big Jacob fan.

OMG well thats new--i love it though cant wait for the next chapter

Ooh I like it.

oo me likt this stoy update asap!!

I love the story so far! Interesting plot too! Please update soon or I will have to take Drastic matters! JK, but seriously please update!