 Dyan23 2/10/11 . chapter 6Thanks for a good tale so far. I am looking forward to reading more of your stories.) |
 Dyan23 2/10/11 . chapter 5And the jealousy continues! Boy Dan sure know when to make an entrance in ruining his son's life. Poor Naley in having their first time interrupted by him. I am glad to see that Coop has cleared it up with Nate on their relationship. Glad that they finally cleared the air with the intimate kiss in the kitchen!) |
 Dyan23 2/10/11 . chapter 4Sounds like Beth has had an eventful birthday... what with her father injured on the race track, and now being the little cupid to get N&H in the same bed as her! A good ending to a day which started them off barely speaking in the car. Another great flashback of how Hale's almost lost Nate at the racetrack and how she found the courage to say that she loved him, and his response with a kiss. Glad to see that Hales is finally beginning to see Nate for who he is as a man. |
 Dyan23 2/10/11 . chapter 3And so Hales meets Nate again at his foundation's dinner. I love how he is jealous once again of his uncle Coop! (and how Hales plays with it.) Love the flashback that comes with their dance together. Even than he was protective of her... even if he was unable to tell her how he felt. Hales is in trouble with Nate being so close to her and having those thoughts about her going to bed without him!) |
 Dyan23 2/10/11 . chapter 2So Nathan is there to stay! Hales is faced with how to deal with him after all these years. I love the playful friendship btw Coop and Hales, and how Nate is so jealous of it! Glad to hear that Taylor has found love with Luke! Poor Hales being taunted by her parents infront of Coop and Nate. WHat are you going to do about this Nate? |
 Dyan23 2/10/11 . chapter 1Great start, with plenty of emotion and drama! Poor Nate, feeling that he doesn't measure up to what Hales thinks of him... and that she is his only true friend. I hope that Nate and Hales are able to to move beyond what happened in the past. |
 Britny Bella 11/15/10 . chapter 6Hello! I just wanted to let you know that this is an amazing story. I have been completley hooked since the first chapter. You have done such a good job of staying true to the characters of Nathan and Haley, but in a whole new story. Reminds me of 3rd and 4th season Naley which was amazing and something I have missed in the newer seasons. My love of the show is purelyy based on their storyline. I really hope that you will find the inspiration to finish this story! I will be subscribing to your alerts and will be reading your other fics as well. Keep up the great work! |
 liverpoolss 5/21/10 . chapter 1update soon love the lucas and taylor pairing |
 ann 2/4/10 . chapter 6 i was so happy to,see what i thought was an update. i was so disappointed when it wasnt . you are such an amazing writer and i always look forward to any thing you write. i hope you get your inspiration back and am thankful that you are finishing your other up good work thanks again |
 Motolid 2/4/10 . chapter 6Hello and thank you for the note. Although I have not read this work in progress fic, I have been read almost all of your other fics and have read them on more than one occassion. I hope you continue to keep your fics posted so that people new to the fandom world can enjoy them as well as others who may read the fics more than once, like me) |
 naley 1/27/10 . chapter 6 what? NO! please, i love this story, it's original while still staying true to OTH roots, you've managed to capture the essence of both nathan and haley and i love this little world you created and all the sexual tension building between them. this is a really great story and im very sad you wont be continuing it.
with that said, i understand how it is, it's hard enough to write and let's face it, the show hasnt been up to par to give people motivation to write but i really do hope that inspiration and creativity will find you again and you'll finish this story. |
 Danika 1/25/10 . chapter 6 No problem. Even I'm not as big of a fan of the show as I used to be. I'm turning to the dark side with vampires and demons (Buffy the vampire slayer. Ah-mazing) Anyways, if you don't have inspiration, there's no point. But this was a great story, and I'm glad you at least gave a reason as to why this story may never be finished. There are some who just stop without reason. But if you ever do get inspiration to write this story again, please do. I always love a good Naley story. ) |
 Isabel 1/24/10 . chapter 1 I just discovered this story..it's amazing you should definitely update it...i really wanna see how their relationship takes off from here. |
 KnKCullen 1/17/10 . chapter 5You wrote an epic chapter like this and then don't update for more than a year. How mean! I do hope you take this story back up because I love it! :D Love the plot, and the writing! Good job! |
 Lozenge89 9/20/09 . chapter 5Love this story just notice you haven't updated it in a while hope you haven't forgotten about this story because its amazing please please update soon |