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Reviews for: Bumblebee's Pokemon Adventure Episode 1
Shockbox 3/5/06 . chapter 1
Shockbox: What's turning the power on and off in the repair bay! A Magnamite or some other Pokemon?
Ash: Or maybe even a Decepticon!

Shockbox: Shut up fool! I don't like you one bit. So if you want to stay, you'll shut up unless you want me to sick Starscream on you.

Ash: Uh right sure. Whatever you say.

Shockbox: Well, other than the fact this was kinda hard to read, I liked it. I would love to see this continued too! UPDATE PLEASE!
kristalShaga 8/6/05 . chapter 1
Please continue! I want to know what will happen with Bumblebee and his pokemon and friend! (begs with puppy dog eyes) Pleeaasee!
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