 Zaedah 2008-07-17 . chapter 1I'm pretty sure I know how to speak, except that being currently speechless makes that hard.
I don't know whether to be depressed that the much feared downward spiral occurs or thrilled that he managed it with and through her for so long. There was something close to peace in the mental lacking. There was beauty in the deaths. Together, that's the key.
I am ridiculously impressed with this piece, though I enjoy all of your work immensely, Your flow and word choices and threads are always so well planned, so skillfully carried out. Bravo yet again! |
 committed 2008-07-15 . chapter 1Oh, such a sad but such a beautiful story. |
 Kyrene once Blood Roses 2008-06-27 . chapter 1Depressing yet not depressing at the same time. You showed us that although the cards they were dealt weren't the best, they were still happy being together. At least they have that. I love how you wrote it. I love stories that are written in this type of way. Love ya! |
 Gil Shalos1 2008-06-20 . chapter 1The thing I love most about this story is the way your writing is at the same time gorgeously rich and absolutely transparent, so the artistry never gets between the reader and the story. it's just heartbreakingly beautiful and captures not just the characters of the show, but some deep truths about love and loss as well. thank you very much for writing it. |
 Isabellec 2008-06-17 . chapter 1Hi--me again--the anti-shipper that loves your work and this story especially. You make me believe. |
 DixieH 2008-06-11 . chapter 1Honestly this is so sad, perhaps because it's just right. It rings true. |
 Serienjunkie 91 2008-06-10 . chapter 1OMG! This is so sad, but you wrote it absolutely beautiful. Very lovely. |
 Kismet23 2008-06-08 . chapter 1Sniff. So very beautiful, and sweet, and sad. Sniff. |
 rindy713 2008-06-07 . chapter 1this story made me cry. it's beautiful but agonizingly sad. |
 tooraf 2008-06-07 . chapter 1i think it's very beautiful and peaceful.
Ali:) |
 mabsy 2008-06-05 . chapter 1this made me sad, in the best possible way. |
 lynne z 2008-06-05 . chapter 1That made me cry...but it was really good. There's something about old couples who you see and know they still really love each other...it also seems to be a rare thing. Very sweet. |
 Aneira44 2008-06-05 . chapter 1Okay, this story is...really heart wrenching. It reminds me of the story of the Japanese Akita who, after his master died, still went to the train station every day wating for him and wouldn't leave until dusk, only to return the next day, always waiting. Alex is like this in your story, I think.
Very nicely done, and...so sad it almost kills something inside of you. A great, nostalgic piece. |
 FusseKat 2008-06-05 . chapter 1This absolutely breaks my heart. Very effecting and very effectively written. |
 Metisse 2008-06-05 . chapter 1Oh you made me cry! It's wonderful! But so sad. They were meant to be together like this forever, you know? Again, wonderful job! |