Truly touching. I cried when Mashiro graduated.

omg i luv this it is so pretty! it is interesting and sweet ... its awesome

Can't wait for Part 2! This was awesome!

ohmyword. that was absolutely amazing. please continue it! i loved it! i cant wait to read more. i've still got tears in my eyes. you just made it so real. i've read the final book so i was unsure as to whether stories that ended a different way (like guessing before the last book came out) but you really made me believe this was real. honestly i wish it had ended like this. even though the real ending was friggin bamf.
cant wait to read more!
- Rosel

this is very well written. Great job! *gives cookie*

I think I can confidently say that this is the best After School Nightmare fanfic on the net.

You've given a lot of love to such a small fandom, and your writing is superb. Characterisation is spot-on, and the interactions of Sou and Mashiro are incredibly dynamic and completely believable. Your imagery is crisp and you thread so much personality into your descriptions and Sou's actions. It's like you've breathed life into a fairly unfathomable character.

On a more technical note, your prose flows beautifully and your emotive skills are amazing.

You did a magnificent job on this and I'm curious to see what has yet to come.

(And on an even more mundane note, T.S. Elliot is fantastic. I can't even begin to tell you how relieved I am to find that people still do read substantial works.)

I really like this. I would be thrilled if you would put up the second part, because you made this almost a cliffy. Thanks.

kant wait 4 part 2 =[ i realli want em 2 end up 2gether xDD ^^

Definitely very well written. :) I can't wait for part 2!

That was honestly the best ASN fic I've ever read.
Seriously, bravo. I'll be looking forward to Part 2.

hah! found u!
yup, i still am not all right with the 1st part but i do like how u've handled sou: his reaction to betrayal and the need to "claim" as it were.
u know my predictions for the series and the dreams, now lets see ]what you come up with :}

well i liked it. it provoked emotion and was well written. Mashiro may have at times been out of character, but if it's useful for the plot, who cares?
anyway, you should write more soon.

so cute:)
you addresed the parts that annoyed me (the letter and "he"), so i am glad you explaind your reasons.:)

An amazing story line, I can’t wait for the second part (hopefully it will be up soon and be happy).
Just one quire if this is a 2 part story why have you said it’s completed on the introduction page and if the second part is going to be a separate story? If so then could you please tell me what the title of the second part is so I know to keep my eye out for it?