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Amber-Jade James
2008-06-11
ch 3,
abuseDefinitly an interesting conversation

Hope to see more soon!

Cheers till next time
AJ
larazzledazzle
2008-06-10
ch 3,
abusenot the best chapter, but everything is appreciated. don't get burned out if not everyone that reads this doesn't review. i don't know about anyone else, but i get review-fatigue. hope your next chapters are fluffy & my advise is to let this ride out and write as much as you can. too many writers abandon their stories, it's a shame to leave them uncompleted.
Amber-Jade James
2008-06-09
ch 2,
abuseanother very good chapter!

Cheers till next time
AJ
Amber-Jade James
2008-06-06
ch 1,
abusealways love reading a new T/P storie :~)

good job!

Cheers till the next chapter
AJ
wmlaw
2008-06-05
ch 1,
abuseInteresting start! I'll keep reading if you keep posting!
larazzledazzle
2008-06-05
ch 1,
abusegood beginning, i have to say that his capture is my least favorite part of their story. i'm a fluff/ happiness person. i do like the stories though that have some seriousness in them; what he went thru is what makes him into a better man and it's what leads to him & pepper finally getting together. so actually the seriousness leads to the fluff:) (i'll always be happy)
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