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Queen of the Red Skittle 2008-11-17 . chapter 1
This was perhaps one of the most mature, well-thought Negima fanfics I've read. I liked the structure to it, and the introspect Evangeline had on each of the girls. I could *feel* the age of her as she contemplated. Really, really IC. Great word choice, solid grammer ... yeah, this fic is *definitely* way more mature than other stuff I've read. Good work; keep writing! XD

QOTRS~*~
Xascul 2008-06-07 . chapter 1
Ha! That is a very good story giving an in-depth view of Eva on blood, i'm sure she would have liked Nagi's blood.
DarkDragonDave 2008-06-06 . chapter 1
Good short fic.

I am, as I have said many times before, a huge Eva fan. And I think you got her character down quite well. The use of the four flavors and considering Nagi the fifth was a neat idea. It made me think back to the few times I've tasted my own blood, (don't ask,) and the fact that it's quite metallic. Like stuffing your mouth with pennies. (Probably says more about my health than it should)

Here's the point where I'd say, "Here's to more Umami," but seeings as this is a oneshot, I'll say... "Here's to your future fics."
Person With Many Aliases 2008-06-06 . chapter 1
This is a really well done piece. Very in character, introspective in that Eva way that makes it so fun to read. Very dark.

It's not much to say, except this short blurb matches Eva perfectly. Good job.
Tikigod784 2008-06-06 . chapter 1
An amusing Evangeline fic. An enjoyable read to be sure. The sarcastic undertones are my favorite part.
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