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| Luigi-fan470 2008-08-27 ch 2, | abuseHow long will it take you to update this? I read through LoK in two days and read the all of this and it's been over a mounth since then and I dought you just put up the second chapter when I started reading. Exelent story though. Plus the original game gives you a perfect body for Yuen. UPDATE SOON!! |
| Smunchlax 2008-08-12 ch 1, | abuseSKLE! AWSOMENESS! :D |
| Angelheart17 2008-08-09 ch 2, | abuseUh... I'm really, really, lost. What promise? What did the mask guy want? Hurry up with the next chapter and can you please keep in mind that quite a few of the readers DO NOT own Nintendo 64s. PS Ya know the Phantom Hourglass chapter? I had and idea about that. Let's say the spirits of Mind, Heart, and Soul(Chala, Trethe and Cheresea) go on a mission sent by Origin to Hyrule. They turn into the three fairies. Leaf becomes Trethe, Nayu (I think that's her name), becomes Chala, and Ciela becomes Cheresea. During the whole backstory, Cheresea loses her memories. I think that would be kinda fun, don't you? |
| kratos's appreintice 2008-08-09 ch 2, | abusei always hated being the deku scrub... |
| Krannx 2008-08-06 ch 2, | abuseLOVE IT! i'll prolly even like it more than your "legend of kratos" one because i love that kratos is WITH anna! (can you tell by my name? hehe) and 2: ITS MAJORAS MASK *cue fangirls* hurray! tis my fav. game for the n64! |
| Toyax 2008-07-27 ch 2, | abuseI'm so glad you finally updated! You better actually update soon this time! Don't keep us waiting! And also, is Yuan's last name really Kafei? Did you find that out from ToS2? |
| VeiledDarkness 2008-07-22 ch 2, | abuseHaha, I'm so glad you made that correlation between Kafei and Yuan's last name. Makes me wonder if you have plans for a certain blue-haired half-elf in this fic... Anyway, good chapter. Lol, poor Kratos, getting attacked by dogs. I always hated that when I was in Deku form. And I assume you're going to make Kratos get all the masks, right? Oh man, I can only imagine his humilation in having to wear the Great Fairy's Mask or the Bunny Hood. Poor, poor fellow. =P |
| RedSeraphim 2008-07-22 ch 2, | abuseAwesome story! I love that Kratos is telling the story, and that he usually expresses himself during his narration, not the dialouge. Just one question, "If Kafei is Yuan, is Anju MARTEL?!?!?! And also, love the joke about how all the girls thinking that he's cute using all of his big, formal words in his deku form. Keep up the good work! ^_^. |
| Religion0 2008-07-21 ch 2, | abuseYou've filled yourself with spoilers, haven't you? I'd say it was more ironic if Kafei was yuan, but then you'd have some problems with Anju, since you've already used Martel. Hmm... please, update soon. |
| Scorch the Hedgehog 2008-07-21 ch 2, | abuseVery nice chapter. I can't wait for Smiley's insane-rant-o-doom. In the game, that part gave me nightmares... he's that creepy, man! Anyways, keep up the good writing! |
| Symphoniafan 2008-07-21 ch 2, | abusehaha, you still haven't lost your touch from the first story. I loved it, and I have to say that I am going to fall in love with this one too. I like how you manage to always find something funny to out into it. I hope you update soon! |
| I.K.A. Valian 2008-07-21 ch 2, | abuseI couldn't help thinking about the irony as Anna bemoaned trading the Moon Tear for the flower. They'll be getting that tear again... and again... and again... hehehehehe, Oh the irony. She'll probably see it so much that she won't want it anymore, lmao. Yuan's last name is revealed in TOS2? I didn't know that... And I wouldn't call it rushed at all. Though, I though Kratos could have acted a little more aloof than he did. But this is like his second life, so I guess he can live a little here, (lol oh the irony). ~I.K.A. Valian |
| RevivedSin 2008-07-21 ch 2, | abuse... Hilarious stuff, freaky, hilarious stuff. AND ANJU TURNS OUT TO BE MARTEL AND KAFEI TURNS INTO YUAN. Not to mention that aging charm on Kafei. |
| Poet Bucky 2008-07-21 ch 2, | abuseactually, it was pretty rushed to me. Not to mention you didn't pick up with the cliffy of the last chapter. Just jumped into the finding of stuff in the town. Even a bit of a flash back or saying 'this is what happened...' before starting the story completely would have been nice. Anyway. s'ides the rushing and all, pretty good chapter. We have Kratos and Anna back to normal, so hehe. it'll be interesting. Bucky. |
| The Sage of Spirits 2008-07-21 ch 2, | abuse"“Yeah! He'll come back!” Anna dingled. “They always do, heheheheh...”" -GOLD, m'dear. GOLD. XD "“You're so cute using big words like that!”" -I loved this line for some reason. "Yuan's last name is Kafei?" -The only thing I've exepted about the sequel. lol "song of time" -You have to capitalize my favorite melody, you know. =( XD Good Luck. SoS |