You finally updated! You can't believe what I felt when I was checking my account for the first time in half a month and I saw 'Scorned'! Once again darling, you just made my day. XD

Though I think you are switching the POV a bit too much, making the story a bit hard to read. But don't worry, I know it was bound to happen to any FE4's novelization fanfics. I'll manage. XD

Maira? Or it is supposed to be Myra? *winks*
You know, Myra...Cygun's ancestor...Emperor Garre's younger brother, who betrayed the Lopt Empire long time ago to defend the civilians. Too bad his rebellion failed, later he was isolated in the Spirit Forest, so were his descendants.
...Am I right?

Ah, Artie is love. XD
I can't believe it that you used the same pet name to Arthur. XD

I'm looking forward for the next chapter~

Wow, nice prologue! Lots of good imagery, that's for sure...Can't wait to hear more!

I have heared of FE 4 but I dont know all the char. If I did I could be more helpful but all I could say is good story.

You've made my day.

A FE4 fanfic, with some of one of my favorite first-gen couple...
And with this cute Arthur..
*_* It's... yeah!

Oh. My. Gawd.
Seisen fic! Arthur! You just made my day!
And you mention Azel! AzelTiltyu! *drools*

So far, I love the prologue.

And Hawk? You gonna use him? How about Femina and the other subs? You are going to mention them too?
How about Sety and Fee?
Or maybe...you can make Sety fights Hawk for Arthur's attention! Or anyone else, triangle love is fun you know. Well? XD

Hope you will update!