 edwardfiend 5/4/12 . chapter 22This was a great story. Very emotional and enthralling. I was pulled in right away just from the description and I just couldn't stop reading; for the little amount of time I had to all I wanted to do was get back to it. Great fic, I am really glad you wrote this. |
 bluepenmovestonight 11/4/11 . chapter 22 HOLY FREAKIN CRAP! BEST FANFIC
EVER WRITEN EVER. Im serious. Theres no better fanfic in the world. You are the most cleverst author ever.
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 bluepenmovestonight 11/2/11 . chapter 8 I am in love with this story. Cant put it down. I do think that at the end of this chapter, Roy should say 'but so are you' or some version of that
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 Angel 9/24/11 . chapter 22 I wish you could write a sequel to this story; about them and their kid. I know it would be really good. |
 Skyethestarlitangel 9/15/11 . chapter 15 This story is friggin amazing! This is my 5th time reading it you're a great author! |
 Anon 7/31/11 . chapter 8 You know, at first I thought this was going to be some kind of crappy "rape-fetish" story, but knowing your style of writing (I'm a fan of your other Royai stories) I found this hard to believe, so despite my best judgement, I decided to start reading it.
I'm glad I did.
This is a REALLY good story. Personally, being a victim of a similar situation, I can feel the pain Riza is going through in this. You caught the emotions of how someone like Riza would react in this situation PERFECTLY. And how Roy is supporting her describes how my own boyfriend has supported me.
This is also helping me figure out how to deal with my own pain, and I actually feel A LOT better after reading this. I basically have the same personality as Riza, I hold everything in because of not wanting to put my stress on others, but I'm always telling people they can tell me their situation. I also have a huge thing with protecting my loved ones. Seeing how Riza reacts and eventually tells Roy her feelings makes me realize I should tell how I'm feeling to keep me from hurting myself.
Again, thank you for writing this. It's truly amazing. |
 O.verP.owered 6/16/11 . chapter 22This is quality fanfiction right here. Amazing! |
 aaorangenime 5/4/11 . chapter 22This story was amazing, i will always remember its greatness. Fantastic job! |
 Kairianne 4/4/11 . chapter 22This story was amazingly written and I can tell that you put a lot of effort into it to make it realistic. There were moments where I teared up, laughed and felt angry, and I like that when I read; to be able to feel the emotions described in the story.
Great work! And thank you for writing it, I don't believe I need to say why. |
 crybaby 11/14/10 . chapter 22 i loved this story . its 'PERFECT'SWEET'LOVING' ND A GREAT PLOT!
It didn make me cry but still awwsum.!
lovd yur lemon but needs mure detail.. |
 StrawberruFruit 11/6/10 . chapter 22I was really touched after reading this beautifully written story.
I don't have the words to describe how amazing it is. I learned a lot of things from it and you also helped me understand how to deal with people's emotions when it comes to the circumstance of a sexual assault.
Thank you for making it! _ |
 Sonomi-chan 10/31/10 . chapter 13Wow...
I was definitely not expecting that. It's so scary to think that the nicest, most well mannered of people could be capable of something like that. I really liked when you wrote about how rapists don't look the way you think. They aren't all unkempt; alot of them are clean-cut and the people you pass off as upstanding citizens. I'm really glad that you had the rapist be that person. It is the most unexpected, yet expected person.
I know I say this in every review, but you really are a phenomenal writer. This is a really intense story. |
 Sonomi-chan 10/31/10 . chapter 8I have no words...
This chapter was absolutely beautifully written. You feel all of the emotion being poured out. I'm so glad she and Roy reached that turning point. |
 Gladiara Alata 5/16/10 . chapter 22Beautiful
This story is an epic in its own right.
You managed to capture the characters' perfectly. I have always loved roy and riza's relationship and after reading this.. My love for the pairing have just grown tenfold
Thank you for writing such a wonderful story |
 AnimePrincessAkina 4/28/10 . chapter 22OMG!i didnt cry at all through the entire thing i got close but didnt but when i read your note at the end it came flowing out you wrote this story so beautifully and it was a HONOR to read it! |