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| jacedes 2008-06-17 ch 1,  | abuseI love Josef/Beth fics and this is total candy. I would love to be in Beth's place in this ;) |
| random00b 2008-06-11 ch 1, | abuseYou know, this can't end well for Beth. But I'd love to see her try to get her cake and eat it too :-) |
| Meyli 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseHeh, it'd be really interesting/fun to know how this all started. |
| PhoebeTheQueenOfDragons 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseI liked it |
| scrappyearnhardt 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuse:) |
| Miss Late Bloomer 2008-06-05 ch 1, | abuseI have no complaints about Josef's character this time around. No snark, but you did capture his darker side through Beth's eyes, his love of being the puppet master, the seducer of mortal and vamp women everywhere. I'm curious to how they even started this up, but Josef is very persausive, so I can guess. You described what it probably feels like to be Josef's freshie very well, making this story hot, hot, hot! Okay, one grumble: How can Mick not know? No only is he a P.I., but he's a vampire. Can't he smell it? They're going to get busted at some point, it's inevitable. Maybe that's exactly what Josef wants. |