 Faithless Reject 2008-09-17 . chapter 4I like it, please don't stop because of lack of reviews. I mean, it's a good storyline and doesn't deserve to be abandoned. It's set up wonderfully, described wonderfully, and just plan wonderful. There are only a few spelling mistakes, but I'm not one to talk. :P I'm still working on it - but keep writing if you like the idea. Don't stop because you don't think anyones reading it, because they are. |