This is really something else. I'm happy with what Stephanie did on the novels, but this somehow compliments, at least for me, a little part of what should've been that first time between Edward and Bella. They wanted it so much, and the books didn't even gave us just a little bit of seduction, although I can understand the young readers thing. Anyhow, this is beautifully written..longer would have been much better, but it was sensational for me. Although that moment when she takes her shirt of and gets to her room, you must have taken in consideration that obviously Edward will be there. But no harm, no foul. It was good anyway...very interesting to read!

Carla

Megan! It's Ann (coloradoann22)! Thought I would leave you a proper review to tell you how awesome your fanfic is. It is so sweet and steamy, unlike all the other sex ones that are aminalistic and crazy I love it!

Beautifully written, Its awesome story, usually i don't like story like this but it was so awesomely written you couldn't not like it,
it left just a bit to be imagined It was a perfect balance of imaginion inspiring, and detail :D

10 out of 10
I loved it!

This is beautifully written.
You leave enough to the imagination for us to make some stuff up ourselves, and yet you write enough for this to be almost graphic.

There is a very thin line between classy and trashy, and you, my dear, have managed to not cross it.

Very well done!

"I saw the spot where I'd fallen just a few hours ago. I shook my head; it reminded me of how uncool I really was.

Damn. Just when I had myself fooled.
Best lines ever because they are so Bella.

must read more...u think there will be a baby...cliche I know but I love the idea anyway...up to u.

ur a great writter

I love your story, every time I get an update notification in my email I start grinning like crazy! This chapter's no exception, it's just so perfect and awesome. I love it :D

Very good! Would love to see more! How many chapters will you do?

ah-mazing! can't wait for the finale!

"There are some things you can't always count on... but I am not one of them. I will always protect you. I will always keep you safe. I will always love you. I don't know how not to.
That line is perfect.

*wipes drool of chin* Dayum. Shower scene. Love it. *fans self* that was ahmazing...

love it!

Wow, I think I stopped breathing there.

Graphic, and yet somehow very classy and Twilight-ish too. I can't imagine how anyone could write this scene better than you have with Bella and Edward.

Thank you for giving my fangirly, fluffy romance fix of the day.

I forgot to breathe.

no, really.

I forgot to breathe.

ALRIGHT.

I'm breathing, now.

oh, just one question: do you really think vampires don't need to shower? I somehow always thought of the Cullens being very clean and neat and showering. but I never gave it that much thought before.

One word: AWESOME! I felt like I was reading Meyers herself. I hope there's something like this in Eclipse.