Yatta! I can review! Great part! Can't wait to read more of this and "Making the Quil Dance". They're your best fics so far! Keep it uuuuuuuup!

I like, I like, I LIKE! I'm so very happy that you up dated this story! Personally, I liked the Chiriko Monologe From Hell (tm)! Yes, while it may have shown a lot of angst, it also helps to open the story up and lead room for his new adventure! Great Job!
E-mail me soon, okay?

Tsukiyo :o)

Oh I am SO glad you UPDATED! It's made my day! I don't know what you're talking about this not being very good though. It's excellent. It's nice to know you put so much effort into your work; it shows through in your writing. I think you write Chiriko very well. He sounds just like I'd imagine it. I guess I don't have any suggestions except for the suggestion that Chiriko should (if you so choose, you're the author) have at least one traveling companion, maybe more. I wish you had written more, then I'd still be reading more of your well-written work. I can't wait till you post the next part! GREAT JOB! KEEP UP THE WONDERFUL WORK!

Wai wai! Me likish this story! Please finish! I'm a big fan of all your fics, but this one is one of the best!

Neko no ko

*blink blink* ARIGATOU, KYRA-CHAN! *glomp* You dedicated a part-of-fic to me! *sniff, wipe tear
I've never been so proud...

Anyhoo, GREAT CHAPTER! I know that you had problems with the Chiriko Monologue, but it really was great. Really!

It really shows his emotions and feelings on the matter of his importance. COOL! Of course, anything Chiriko rocks. _

Much Luv,

Emily

oooohhhhh...poor baby chiriko-chan! Part of the story is simply amusing. You covered all character well... (Tasuki is a good big brother, ne?)

How could I forget to review this no da? Gomen nasai! Anyway, this is sooooooooo cool! I'm really looking forward to the next part! _. Conitnue no da!

waiii! please write more, I'll give you a real review when you finish it -

Oh my God Oh my God oh my God! This is an awesome fic! The best Chiriko one I've ever read (not that there are enough fics out there to read...) Chiriko just isn't given enough credit! It's not fair! PLEASE FINISH! I have low mental stability, and live only for fanfics! *pause* Okay, that sounds really pathetic...

I love your Chiriko fics, this is one of my favorites! Please write more!;

Oooohhhh...I've got goosebumps. This was good, REAL good. I love Chiriko, and I think this is a great start to a great story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PUT THE NEXT CHAPTER UP SOON!

wow! awesome story! please finish it, i will be the first to read it! )

ok this looks good so far! please continue! I love it! and I want to find out what happens not get stuck with some unfinished story that had the potential(sp?) to be totally sugoi! well I love it so far so get the next part out asap!

Yes! Chiriko! Finally! *takes a deep breath and calms down* Okay, I AM calm. This is excellent; you've got to finish it!

WOOOOOAH! GREAT FIC! Keep writing! There just areb't enough Chiriko faic these days, and I wanted to give you credit! BTW, you should check out my first Chiriko fic even though I think it stinks ). It's called Last Sensations Chiriko's Demise