eh, i kinda like it, but I'm not much of a SheeLloyd fan, but i can deal with it. because nobody said anything about Lloyd dying...UPDATE IT. BECAUSE I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENED. D=

AWESOME! I love Sheelloyd. Please update soon.

DO NOT POST MY FANFICTION ON YOUR SITE. WAIT TO HEAR BACK FROM AUTHORS BEFORE POSTING IT WITHOUT PERMISSION!

Okay I encourage you to go on... I've always been interested in these type of fics, and I wanna see where you take it. As for bringing Lloyd back, like the others said. If your going to do that, Mithos cannot be the main super power anymore, it's not that he's not pulling his own strings it's that somoene much stronger is planning something. Thats just my suggestion though you may already ahve a game plan. If you do, follow it, maybe edit it a bit, but only change what is necessary.
I wish you good luck on your next chapter and I will be watching.

Maybe you should have Lloyd came back in the future as an angel or something?

You know, since he IS the son of Kratos, he probably WOULD gain some of his angel powers and such. So...

Good story, though. Update ASAP.

Well.. it IS a very unique idea, thoguh how the group is going to continue onwards without their "leader to support them and hold them together is wuite the challenge to imagine, not to forget to write about! *mumbles* lets just hope Kratos doesn't throw fit big enough to destroy the whole group...

Mayhap you'll need to... "resurect" Lloyd someway later on, though how or through what I'll leave up to you muse ^^

Please go on ASAP!