This is very sad, and beautifully written, great job1 My only suggestion is that this category is for stories inspired by the 1995 A Little Princess movie, so I'd advise you to move your story to the songfic section. If you wrote a fantasy story, would you give it to a publisher which sells nonfiction books? It's like that.

Um...nice story and all, but what does this have to do with A Little Princess? Go to FictionPress if you want to post original stories.

Meanie! Now I can't stop crying!

You realize that it's against the rules to post stories in the wrong category/website, right?

Omg... I read the story but it didn't make me cry at first, but them I looked up the song on youtube and listened to it and thought about what the story said, and watched a little music video someone made I just started crying and couldn't stop!

Great job, and if I could rate, it'd be 5 stars. :)

I love it!

A great story. Very good.

It's beautiful. I love it, almos made me cry.

wow, thats a really sad story...

:'( Its sad when i read this and listen to the song, nice job