You've got a really cool story going here, I can't wait to see more of it. Keep up the good work!
S.

Awesome action sequence! Poor Fillmore. And Sarge, though it's never quite as easy to feel sorry for him, huh? XD Still, poor Sarge. His last words there were rather ominous. I shudder to think what he has in store for Fill. And of course, I LMFAO over the "rough sex" bit. ^_^

I love Fillmore's idea of how to explain their dents to the others. This would make a fine standalone fanfic with just these three chapters, but writing about Sarge's attempts to train Fillmore to fight will be even more intriguing. I love the mix of humor and suspense used in the fight scene.

i hop nothing bad happens to fillmore!

Wow. That went from a nice, gay day frolicking in the woods (pun intended) to a giant UH-OH really fast. How dare you leave me hanging like that! EEK! Fight, Fillmore, fight!

"HOW MANY TIMES DO WE HAVE TO DO THIS?!" = Bwahahahahahaha!

Nice little fic so far. Certainly got my attention. Awesome idea too, Fillmore learning to stand up for himself. Glad to see you're not giving up on fic writing. You're too good to quit.

LOLed at that last bit between Fill and Sarge at the fence. Who wouldn't want to kiss that adorably enormous face? XD

On to chapter two!