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Paigey08
2009-09-10 . chapter 4
I loved it!
Cant wait for the next update=]x
hms fan
2009-07-17 . chapter 3
OMG that was HOT im dyeing for a to see what happens please please please update soon
xo.miss-c.xo
2009-02-21 . chapter 3
ah im dying for a new chapter of this story. this is probably one of the best hsm stories out there and its only 4 chapters! i cant wait to see what else you have in store for everyones favorite couple! update soon =)
foreverzanessa
2009-01-30 . chapter 4
Please continue this story I want to know what happens next.
xXxRCEXPRESSxXx
2008-11-01 . chapter 4
HOLY BEJESUS! That was so hot! At the start I loved how everything messed up; how they were interrupted, how they had to drive the drunken couple home, how awkward the ride home was, how Sharpay ended up telling Gabriella everything, etc... I loved that part in the elevator, even though not as much happened compared to what happened in the actual hotel room, it was still hot. I love the Troy in your stories, you make him sound so unbelievably sexy and unnattainable by anyone except for Gabriella, like they are destined to be with each other, and I like that most in your stories...and how hot you make everything sound with very little words.

I love the fact that he's her first but she's not his coz then he knows what he's doing since he's in control and her being a virgin before him makes it seems like she's been waiting for the right person and that ends up being Troy. And WOW btw you write some of the best sex scenes I have ever read!

This story is the hottest story of yours and probably in the whole hsm section on FF. It's definately the hottest scene I've read. What makes this story so hot is the relationship between Troy and Gabriella. The fact that she's his doctor makes her off limits, yet he feels like he has to have her. This is far by my favourite story of yours even though it's only 4 chapters long, and I know you're trying to finish off your other stories but please update this story when you can. I really can't wait to read what you come up with next chapter!

x.X.xSheenax.X.x
alexandragrace-xo-
2008-09-29 . chapter 4
Again! Wow! You sure no how to write a good story :D
Man i love it :D
Can't wait to see what happens next :]
UD soon

XO
someonelikeyou10
2008-09-23 . chapter 4
are you gonna stop this story or finish it?
i love it btw:)
JennCorinthos
2008-09-20 . chapter 4
Cant believe Sharpay did that to her.. And Gabs doing her patient... I cant wait to read more...

JENNIFER
xXxRCEXPRESSxXx
2008-09-05 . chapter 3
lOl why is it that Chad always interrupts at the wrong time? 'He was going to be murdered slowly...It was their right' lOl

Wow that was really sexy! I could feel the sexual tension from here..that's impressive! I love Sharpay's character in this story...but somehow I hate it, she]'s too much or me to handle lOl. I loved Gabriella's reaction when she found out Troy was her date, which always happens but it's different now because...it's her patient..and wrong. The writing was so good in the second part of the story - my stomach was churning just reading! It was really really hot! The dancing, the words, everything! Ooh...Gabriella, getting involved with a patient...but then again, with someone as hot as Troy..who can resist =P ANyway awesome chapter!

x.X.xSheenax.X.x
xXxRCEXPRESSxXx
2008-09-05 . chapter 2
This is my favourite story of yours, along with 'It's not over', I love the plot in both. Both chapters so far, you have described the heels on Gabriella which I thought was a really original touch =) I loved mostly how you described the sexual tension and lust in that room, it was so intense! The way you described everything in this chapter was brilliant, you're an awesome writer. There's a line that Troy says that made me so hot and almost jump outta my seat lOl. '...When I see a woman with legs I want around my shoulders...' There's something about that line that makes me go weak all over lOl.

x.X.xSheenax.X.x
xXxRCEXPRESSxXx
2008-09-05 . chapter 1
God I love your stories and I finally found time to review. Your writing is phenomenal! You have good storylines, they're really original and you really make the writing 'yours'. This chapter was great, I loved that you didn't go on and on about Troy and Gabriella's life before they met, you just showed it in the first chapter. I love in this chapter how Gabriella's so controlling and Troy's stubborn as hell. Anyway awesome chapter, keep up the great work!

x.X.xSheenax.X.x
The Beauty Authority
2008-09-04 . chapter 4
heck, that was intense! pwease update soon!

XToodlesx
insanitylaughs
2008-09-04 . chapter 4
Wow I was not expecting that! I can't believe Sharpay would do that, I wonder how they'll work through it. update soon please!
S P A R K L E . X 0
2008-09-01 . chapter 4
Love it!
It's Amazing!
-Twinkle
Kerryshine
2008-08-30 . chapter 4
OMG! i love this story i cant wait to see what will happen next.PLEASE HURRY but no pressure
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