This was really well written! :D
I love the last line:
"…he had allowed for her to hear the warmth and gentle purity of the smile in his voice."
Really, really good job. x

Um... Wow. Uh... I'm speechless. That was just... incredible, and that's possibly the biggest understatement I've ever made. Just wow.

lol great story!!

u should make a sequel where they're both at school and someone's like wtf u have a hickey on ur neck and both of them r like shit...

lol

FAV

That... was... beautiful! That was one of the best KallenXZero/Smut/Oh-How-Juicy fic I have ever read! XD You know what I liked most, though? You know, besides the good smex parts? The fact that you actually inserted some parts of the episodes in your fic. And the fact that you described what the characters feelings were in the episode was just amazing. Also, I think you did a pretty good job staying in-character! You kept Kallen just as curious as ever but never pushing it too far and you kept Zero just as silent yet intrigued as ever. I take my hat off to you in writing a very delicious and interesting fic! ^_^ Keep it up!

Normally the lemons on this site are way too focused on the sex and take only a little time to describe it. And even then they're not that great. But this is possibly the greatest lemon ever written on this site. KallenXLelouch is the best pairing in anime history and your writing gives them an absolutely perfect moment. I have never read a more descriptive story on fanfiction and i commend you for your devotion. Thank you for the wonderful story

she really didnt see his face?

Very hot and sexy; I like it!

Brilliant! possibly the best portrayal of all characters. Truly a Masterpiece.

Great.

Excellent. Fantastically erotic too. I will be holding onto this story for some time ;)

I really wish I could say more, but no words come to me now. You are a master. That is all.

This is definitely one of the best Kallen x Lelouch fic I've ever read!!

I personally thought that was a very well written fanfic. Definitely not your average lemon. Good job! (:

Best lemon in the world! XD
Well-written, and very poetic!
LOVE IT!

WOW!
This fanfic has been one very amazing...
All I can say right now is BRAVO!

Yes yes, very in character, and very nice! One of the better lemon fics I've red. Keep up the great work!