 super12 2009-11-10 . chapter 52Loved the story!!
Second fantastic peice of work! |
 super12 2009-11-07 . chapter 4Just by reading these first chapters I can see this will be as good as your last story if not better!
Im review if i have more word of praise in later chapters!! |
 IKeepGoldFishInMyBra 2009-10-12 . chapter 52This story is just so beyond anything in this fandom that I have ever read, and I'm a little (okay, okay, a lot) speechless! |
 IolantheAlias 2009-08-18 . chapter 2Just a little FYI:
I saved this story to a Word file so that I could read it any time I wanted. It was 502 pages (Verdana 10-point) and over 227,0 words.
Also one of the best fics I've ever read. |
 Wings90 2009-07-27 . chapter 29Wow, this is *so* cool! Don't know why you keep apologizing before teh science parts, they're among my favorites, it's partly what makes this story so great for me... Pity you didn't write the movie. Really. Though, to be fair, I know they can't put many explanations into movies, it'd be far too long and it's not everyone's cup of tea, but still, I love this. And this transportation thing is brilliant. Really. Great story. :)
“What kind of Boy Scout would I be if I wasn’t prepared?” XD
I enjoyed Martha and Lois' talk a lot, too. :)
-Wings |
 Wings90 2009-07-14 . chapter 1Wow. *Nice* explanation! I always thought that turning-back-time thing was pretty stupid - you just made it more believable. *happy sigh* This is why I love fan fiction. :)
Off to read! *grin*
-Wings |
 mwjen 2009-07-06 . chapter 52I love how you filled in the glaring plot holes from the movie, thanks for posting. |
 DSDragon 2009-07-03 . chapter 21Love the references . . . Donner Elementary, Kidder Avenue, Reeves Lane . . . HA! Like Schuster's Field in Lois & Clark: TNAOS.
And of course, I'm loving the story itself so far, too. |
 SSG Michael B Jackson 2009-06-24 . chapter 52A great ending to a great retelling of this story. The film was good, but this story, with all its' myriad little details and more engaging storyline. is far better in my opinion. I suppose that's a clue as to where you probably should seek to pedal your talents; I don't know what you do for a living right now, but I'm more than convinced that you could make a successful career for yourself in either script writing or novels. Thank you very much for this story and the time and effort you've put into it. |
 drvr8 2009-05-28 . chapter 52Really enjoyed this story. Using Kara to provide the reason for his six year absence provided a much more realistic reason and gave Clark so much more character, depth and maturity. Although telling so many people about his secret seemed very odd at the beginning of the story and I was wondering why he wouldn't ask a friend like Bruce Wayne to clear the path for his legal documents and proof of his DNA?
Really enjoyed how you wrote Lex and let us into his train of thoughts and plotted his schemes. All the time erasing was explained well, however, it seemed so odd how Lois quickly accepted Clark's explanations and softened only after seeing Clark interact with the children and hearing Jor-El reveal the real events. I wish you could have added in a few more Clark & Lois moments to show how they reformed their relationship but the epilogue summary was very nice.
Great story and you really did tie the universe together much better than the film did. |
 I'm Feeling Puckish 2009-05-28 . chapter 52Great ending - I've really enjoyed reading your story! :) |
 batfan7 2009-05-27 . chapter 52Such a wonderful story. What a lovely ending too - Clark's reflections on family, Luthor's ego ensuring his continued inprisionment... I liked how you mentioned the top criminal lawyers shunning Luthor after he killed his last one. Smart people. I also liked how Perry and Clark seemed to sort of dance around whether Clark knows that Perry knows or not. And a new mini-Kent is on the way! The universe can never have enough mini-Kents in it :-) Not every single thing was touched on here at the end, but close enough to make it very satisfying. I'm just sad that it's over now.
Will you concider making a sequel, or perhaps re-doing a different hero's story? Maybe introduce Wonder Woman, re-do Batman Begins, or perhaps a new Superman story, but from a different universe (Smallville, Lois and Clark, the Justice League cartoon, or whatever) I love your writing and just hope you'll plan another epic tale! |
 mistressbabette51 2009-05-25 . chapter 52Oh, I read this over the weekend, while away, and I savored every word. Absolutely loved it, especially the fact that Lois is expecting!
So happy you tied up Luthor, no loose ends. He can't get out of prison on a technicality this time. There are just too many favorite scenes to list them, but here are a few that come to mind: Lois and Jor-El working together; the kids' 'outing' and the stunned reactions of people who witnessed it; Lois' rescue of Clark in the ocean; and of course, all the 'Krypto tech'!! Wonderful..
Thank you for penning this amazing story!! *two thumbs up* |
 robertxgillis 2009-05-25 . chapter 52I have followed this since the beginning. You are an amazing and gifted writer. Your attention to detail is perfect. may I simply say this: best... Superman... fan fic... Ever. if people want to know how to write for Superman, they should read this first. Sorry to see it end but thank you, thank you! |
 jason kent 2009-05-24 . chapter 52This is such a good story. =) |