Hi

I just read your story WOW it was great.

good story, i like it

Wow!

Very good story there!
I hope to read more from you!

I'm going to squeak with shock until you write another multi chapter story. Honest. I'll wait eagerly for another Pretender story, eagerly. Comparing the Highlander/ Pretender crossover with this leaves this the better story. The other one's still good, but it's silver, and this is gold.

YEAH! Just what The Pretender never had, a happy ending! Thank you! Need I say I loved it?

I think that was the most beutiful story I've ever read. I think I'm going to cry...to late.

i loved your story. At the end chapter 3 :all my dreams pass beforey my eyes a curiosity. Why is thare the word sequel.

You are a natural. Can't wait for the next one to come out (wink, wink) ...)

nifty wow... lyle and the Triumvirat really not bad... who would have thought... nifty story)

I love the story so far. I'm looking forward to finishing it but the 10th chapter is repeated and the 11th chapter is missing. Hope it's fixed soon so I can read the whole story.

Just finished reading your story. Liked it very much. Keep on writing. Liked the way you finalised it.

I really like the direction this story is going. Keep up the good work.

I love this story, I come back every day to see if the next chapter is up. Poor J and M.P. Can't wait to see what happens.

Now, Sidney will be what? The father?

Lyle? The brother?

Miss Parker? The best friend soon to be girfriend maybe?

Mr. Reins? The annoying uncle?

You have to add somemore in this!

This is a very good story, with an exciting plot. There weren't any spelling or grammatical errors that i could find. I hope you continue on with the story line, it's a very good idea. Keep on writing.