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| Revenge TheBitch 2008-07-06 ch 1, | abuseI agree with Darkslayer; This chapter reads very well. I'm holding off for more chapters before I give a full critique, but I look forward to seeing where you'll go with this. |
| DarkSlayer84 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is well written; please continue. ^_^ |