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Dreaming-Of-A-Nightmare
2009-07-26 . chapter 1
cliche plot or not, i like yours better than all the others. :D
The Visitor
2009-05-24 . chapter 1
Oh, poor Max. I'm just getting over a nasty week-long bout of the cold/flu/ickiness, so I know just how the poor baby feels. I don't mind the fever and the fatigue so much as the coughing! Those painful coughs where it's like you're hacking up a lung and can't breathe. I do wish I had a Jude to take care of me.

This is my new favorite pairing as I've just watched Across the Universe this week (shameful, I know, especially for a die hard Beatles fan). I just find boy-love so darn cute. Jude's such a sweetie, and his and Max's interactions in your stories are so adorable!
MaxXxCarrigan
2008-10-18 . chapter 1
Aww i have to say it was sweet. It may have not been funny but it was sweet and heartfelt. :D Awesome job as always and I hope Max gets better. ;]
emeralddragonchild
2008-06-15 . chapter 1
I seriously love your Max and Jude. They kick **. You make me jealous because I know I totally bombed at writing them compared to you.

I love how you did Sadie, too. Caring and slightly motherly, but at the same time totally making someone else do everything. :)
TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010
2008-06-10 . chapter 1
So sorry I didn't review when I read this, I was in a rush =D.

Oh, this was full of funny, sweet mushy-goodness! Poor Max! In the fics where he's sick, he reminds me of a adorable, but sad puppy. You were very right about a fact you stated in your other fic, that instead of Max's whining being annoying, it's endearing.

Judey's such a sweetie. You wrote him so well, that's EXACTLY what he would do, including sitting on top of Max to take his damn medicine.

This line cracked me up:

One of these days, a good breeze was going to knock him over and into a shrub or something.

Like, it was funny like when a bird flies into a window? It's funny, but kind of like "you-poor-thing" at the same time?

Am I making any sense? Haha. NO.

Anyway, the last part of this was so filled with adorable boy-love it just about killed me.

And I'm going to stop babbling now. =D
Lovely, lovely job, as always.
Much love
~KT
xMalloryx
2008-06-10 . chapter 1
I love all your little Max/Jude stories, they never fail to make me smile but I think this is my favorite. You capture the characters so well and it's totally believeable. You're a fabulous writter and I'd love for you to write more of these in the future. Also, kudo's for sticking Yer Blues in there. Not only is it an amazing song, it fit the story so well. :]
blackbirdxsinging
2008-06-08 . chapter 1
Sadie and Pru were perfect.
I love all your little Judey/Max stories. they make me smile =)
and I love the notes at the end... haha!

keep it up!!
Amelia
2008-06-07 . chapter 1
That was cute. I love the max/jude stories. U should totally consider a chapter 2
FinnyGene
2008-06-07 . chapter 1
I really liked Sadie in this one; she was very in-character. I loved "I like strawberries better, meself." Great fic!
ThisIsYourSong
2008-06-06 . chapter 1
Wow, this was so great and well written. You've really got the characters down, you write them so well.

I loved Sally, I thought she was sweet, she's exactly the type of girl Jude would bring home and who wouldn't find that accent adorable?!

I adore the Max/Jude dynamics you've got going on here ... they just fit so well and I really do think they'd do anything for each other.

Okay, I'm going to stop the rambling and go to sleep because it's really late here, but I just felt like I had to review this because I loved it so much... keep writing!!
Maddiecake
2008-06-06 . chapter 1
This was adorable! I love your characterizations and the fact that you included Prudence and Sadie, who are some of the most looked-over characters in this fandom...

Well-done, very good length for this sort of thing and you didn't actually include any real physical Max/Jude aside from Jude's implying that they had sex.

As far as Sally goes... she was fantastic... even if she only appeared for a little bit :]

~ Madeleine
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