I really like this

lovely! it'd be even better if team 8 really did face itachi (would make ita/hina an even more feasible idea!), but i don't think that actually happened in the manga/anime, did it :/

Your effort in trying to make those two in character really did pay off. It's as close as anyone can get. As for the story (sorry in advance for lacking a better word), it's simply wonderful. I was left speechless. Not one sentence was unnecessary, and I loved your use of imagery and how you used a list to present the plot. Their relationship was so heartbreaking. Definitely a new favorite of mine. :) You're awesome! Thank you very much for sharing this with us.

awesome

this is actually really good

It's official: I love your ItaHina fics! (short as they may be)You're really good at portraying them in a way that's interesting and believable at the same time!

...i love it...sorry, i don't know what else to say. i think it made me cry. especially the last rule. that might just be a reaction from lack of sleep but...i don't know. i love it

omigosh i love this. its... amazing.

that was so well written, well done. i luved it. hope you write more like this. it was beautiful.

*sniffle* Beatiful, but sad. :')

That was deep. I liked it. I never read anything like this before. It was cool.