 -jetblacksakura- 2009-02-05 . chapter 6you really like the
"** is for dog, dogs bark, bark is to trees, tree belong to nature, and nature is beautiful" thing don't you.
you have it in two of your stories.
anyway i like the story |
 werewolfluvr147 2008-06-07 . chapter 2Cool story, sounds awesome. Ok well I think that Sakura shuld kinda like Sasuke, but he loves her secrctly, like no one knows. Sakura should be a nerd that gets a makeover, so the pop star identy's like mind blowing when they find out. Make the whole Ino Shika thing like Sasue ad Sakura, like secretly in love. Tenten should be friends with Neji, and not relize she likes him until the middle. She should be outgoing, We need more of those kinda stories. No, that seems kinda cliche, And why would she tell them during truth or dare anyway? Yeah, the should, so he could be her protecter, and he should know about the popstar thing, so he'll be like an overprotective brother like character.
Well, I hope this helped, and love your story, you shold keep going with it. |