Hm... Interesting! Its really good. I guess its only the usual mistakes... JYJYs!~~

i understand bella's turmoil, but she doesn't seem to love edward as much as she once did. she's questioning herself way too much and she should just chill and quit saying that it's all a big mistake, she never shoulda done this or that, and she should just face this head on, cuz it's all she's got.

Wow that was seriously some remarkable writing. That was a great story for the ending of twilight. You need to try not to be so good at...EVERYTHING. If you don't stop you're going to make everyone else look bad :D

That was a great story! I loved at so much. Bella's power was so cool, and the part where she turned the Volturi into "vegitarians" was hilarious! Definitely going in my favorites! X

this was really good!
u did a very good job at proving that bella being changed too early would have been a problem, like emotionally u did a very good job
plus the epilogue is very romantic and cute :D

This story was pure awesomeness! I loved it.

really good

-squeal-
i loved the epilogue!
and the story as well!
you write really well :)

ok so when edward was talking about Mike and he says "how will i ever go on?" i burst out laughing because it sounded like the of the BD quotes of the day ya kno "oh...mike how will i go on?" ya so just some of my random thoughts...GREAT STORY!

That was really cute.
The queen bee remark made me laugh every time I read it! Teehee!

don't worry. I'll make a good husband!

i thought you were dead!

WHOO FINISH! Yay I know it's going to be romantic for sure now. And now I think you should write a sequel. Aahaha I'm soo greedy :P But just kidding, you don't have to if you don't want to xD
But overall, this has been a really good story and I'm looking forward to read your next story! Good luck and have fun! :D

YAY!

I think you deserve the redtwiheart12 award for Best Vampire Bella Power!