Aw... DD: So adorable and wonderfully written~. Can't wait for more ♥

AWUH, poor Machi x[ I want more, of course. Nice writing and such, excellent character work.

aww. poor Yun-Yun. still, he maybe deserved it. and Machi's gone, so now the story can progress. yay. not that i really have anything against Machi (you were possibly a little harsh calling her air-headed) but she does sort of get in the way of Yukeru fics...

Things I liked:
I don't blame Yun-Yun for avoiding Kaki-kun
Poor Yuki and poor Machi
I love how Tohru and Machi can communicate so easily

So sad and so cute
~Myst
Things that I didn't like:
Hmm, a lot of people in Japan now know what Christmas is

oh! a new Yukeru fic. there haven't been any more of these in ages...

a most definitely intersting start. wondering how it's gonna continue...

and i wish the house would stop creaking. i know i'm the only person here, but i'm so sure there's something moving around in here...not that that's remotely relevant, so i'll just go away...

Vicky

0.0 I thought I was the only one who did Yukeru! Hello, brotheren...or sister-en...anywhozerz, that was pretty good writing and I will be happy to read more!

hmm..

Interesting plot it was a bit funny which
I liked alot!^^
I found a few grammer mistakes but it was still very great!
Overall, I have to say it was pretty darn good and you
should update soon.I would very much like to see where this
fanfic will go! :)

Things I liked:
Good story concept - lol this sounds fun
Nice writing style
Wow Kakeru likes to party hard
Wow I like the part at the end with Kaki-kun on top of Yun-Yun

Ways to improve:
Work on strengthening characterization

Wow, kinda weird but very funny
~Myst