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| candycloud44 2008-09-06 ch 1,  | abuseaw, that was cute. and funneh. |
| oonezumi 2008-07-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was just too adorable! i like it better when their nice to each other. X3 You did their personalities perfectly. “Hey, if you’re gonna deny me sex you don’t get to use me as a cuddle pillow.” LOLZ. great fanfiction. *fav* |
| youkai chick supreme 2008-07-07 ch 1, | abuseoh, i do so love it when they're sweet to each other. very, very cute and well written! yay! |
| Nadeshiko Hinamori 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abuseEllo again! like i said before MattXMello rox! woo hoo anyway keep writing anime and I'll read them lol |
| ashley regret 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abusezomg, this was great ^-^ i totally loved the last paragraphs, though..i wonder what mello was doing that it took so long, poor matty ._. kind!mello is so cute *melt* *coughtheyaresohottheycauseglobalwarmingcough* |
| Shiny Little Toaster 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abuseAww that was cute. Nicely written. Actually excellent, I enjoyed it. |
| Crazy Little Feline 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abuseAdorable! I loved it. It was cute and well-written and all around my favorite combination of writing elements. XP I really like how you added the Wammy's slang part. Really nice detail. “Mm, I’m always hotter than you,” -snicker- That's so like Matt. I can see him saying that. I think you characterized them both pretty perfectly. (Though it is kind of hard for Matt to be OOC. XD) But, Mello was great. You made him just like I pictured him, which was awesome! Overall, an awesome fic, especially for a first time writing for Death Note! |
| flamablechoklit 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abusegreat job. i especially liked Matt's disjointed heat-induced thoughts lol. these two are my favorite and you did really well especially since this was your first DN fic. i enjoyed :) |
| AngeloftheOdd 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abuseAww that was really sweet and very well written. If the weather where you are is anything like it is here, I can see the inspiration @_@ LOL It really reminded me of my boyfriend and I yesterday walking around in all black >. |
| Kokoro Sabishii 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseYays! I liked it! Very nice for a first DN fanfic, it was so cute, I smiled all the way through. The plot was pretty original too, so kudos! You have made me happy, I send you an invisible toaster. Write more stuff! ^_^ |
| leah-kawaii 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseOoh, April! This was great! "If you keep squirming like that you're going to turn me on." *fangirl squeal* x3 I loved it! |