Your story was really good, although I wished you would have written about when Scott was in Jeans/Phoenix's mind. Can't wait to read your sequel.

Write MOAR. :P

woo! Getting better and better!

was a tad disappointed that Beast didn't utter his catchphrase "Oh, my stars and garters..." but this was an exciting chapter nonetheless.

looking forward to more. :)

“Your brother is special to me, Alex. I value your loyalty, but his defiance… futile though it is, I find it… delicious.”

- Aww, Emma is a woman after my own heart. She wants a big, strong, sexy man to break. ^^

Beast is such an awesome fellow. That is all that needs to be said of him.

“Yeah, Emma’s problem was always an overabundance of compassion,” Cyclops answered sarcastically.
- I LOL'd. I always thought it was an overabundance of breasts. They do create back problems. *shrug*

I get this crazy mental picture of Emma going "You've ruined everything!" ala Hermione in HP and the Goblet of Fire. xD 'Cept Emma wouldn't cry. Or wear pink. o.O

DUN DUN DUN..

Write more, betch.

“Then why, Scott, is your heart racing? Your breathing rapid? Your senses tingling.”
-- LOL. Cyclops senses tingling... No no. I think it was a more physical part of him that was tingling, darling.

Oh very, very sneaky, Mister. Taking control of the XMansion with sexual whims. Now you're thinking like a proper Emma!
She must be practically naked, since she's col Emma in this. :)
Emma Frost's level of awesomeness if inversely proportional to how much clothing she is wearing. Never forget this. ;)

Mystique's roundhouse kick is an unsatisfactory image without having her change into Chuck Norris's form FIRST.

lol. Nick Fury- kicker of ** and political officianado.

First of all:

SQUEAL! You did the Logan x Ororo love thing you and I wholly support. It made me so happy. :D

I find it highly ironic, I must say, that Emma is less flirtatious when wet... ;)

“So, you’ve flown it before?” he asks.

“Hell no,” Wolverine answered cheerfully as they ascended.

- So Wolvie.

So, lessons I learned from this chapter:
1. Kill a mutant's boyfriend and it's bye bye to Kansas, Toto.
2. Small carnal mammals cannot drive moderately-sized aircraft.
3. Mutants are the new gays/african americans/latin americans. But I did know this before. Also, Blue is out.
4. Because of 3- The Marvelverse President must be a Republican. Both because the poor fuzzy blue guy was killed by him, and the whole 'solving the mutant problem' thing. :P

“Yes,” Storm mock-agreed, “you performed admirably right up until the point where you got shot.”
-- That sarcastic wit sounds like something you or I would say. Or Bethany and Holly for that matter. Well played, Sir, well played. ;)

Haha. Scott got owned hard. Like, in the bum hard.

*jawdrop* So you actually have me very on the edge of my seat intrigued with Emma capturing Jean and Magpie being helpful!

Woo!

Love ya!

Storm’s eyes went white, and the conditions outside did just the opposite.
-- Clever, very clever. ;)
make Cyclops’s face go numb. It was just as well; it made his features more closely resemble his emotions.
- lolololemokidlololol
At first she wondered if she was the victim of the largest bird to ever attack a human, but then she realized the wings belonged to a man.
- I LOL'd.
Oh Havok/Cyclops. It's so funny how much they hate each other. :)

“Alright, let’s calm down here,” Logan insisted
- That ust ain't right. :P

Bobby and Rogue were too busy oogling at each other to take as much notice of his entrance.

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It's no fair flaunting heterosexuality if you KNOW he's coming out to you. :P
But very appropriate for the sad sexless couple. Hehe.

“We don’t need to read her mind,” Scott insisted. “She’s hiding something. And whatever it is, it’s something big.”


- Yeah. It's her LIBIDO! Hehe. It's only 2 pages so far, but already a million times better! Way to go hon!

Great story. Poor Kurt! Love the RoLo action.

Emma's team looks promising
very cool

o...definitely looking forward to more on this one...great start

any kitty and colossus per chance?? that's ok if not, just wondering