Oh, nice job. It shows Byakuya in a new light. I like it. (:

You did an excellent job on maintaining Byakuya's attitude. Though I really don't like his parents.

I only saw two errors--one grammatical, one spelling--in the entire story. That's amazing.

Nice job on the one-shot!

-
Miko-chan!

*sigh* its so nice to read after a few months of writing it.

Whew that was long good job on it. :)

Very nice.

A quick glimpse of Kuchiki Byakuya's personal life. It's a good explanation on why he seem to be an emotionless rock. Poor Byakushie... :o)