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Reviews for: A Cup of Jello
Pandora147 8/2/08 . chapter 1
I think that what I liked most about this was that it wasn't about an instant friendship but rather about reaching that place somewhere between constant bickering and friendship. That you don't have Sharpay CHANGE as a result of the somewhat mutual understanding. That it's not a case of, okay, now we've talked about this so we're best friends and we're gonna go shopping and talk about boys. Given my liking of the gradual build in Sharpay (which, in my case, gradual means like sixty chapters. But whatever). It felt more real this way. I think this is where I struggle with stories which integrate Sharpay into the group straight away, this place here that you have to be at before you can forge anything closer. Hmm so yes. Who knows, you might convert me one of these days :P
xxTwilightHSMxx 6/11/08 . chapter 1
Lol. That was awesome! LOved the jello fight!
719.take.my.hand.719 6/8/08 . chapter 1
that was so cool great job
kristenkay0606 6/7/08 . chapter 1
aw Audrey this was so cute! i loved how you gave Sharpay a softer side...it made her more likable and more human like. Great job! and thanks to all the Za angels for the bday wished yesterday it was so sweet!
elle on air 6/7/08 . chapter 1
haha that's hilarious. i love it :D

The ZA Angels have some brillant ideas]
avrilstar 6/7/08 . chapter 1
Wow who knew a cup of jello could cause such drama?

Seriously really liked this, lots of clever words but you captured the tension between them superbly.

Best Sharpay and Gabriella argument ive read!
didumissmeofcourseudid 6/7/08 . chapter 1
Aw! Audrey that was really funny and cute.
isacz 6/7/08 . chapter 1
I LOVE it! great job!)
bug2001 6/7/08 . chapter 1
This was really great! Also, totally believable because they weren't perfect BFF in the end ... just hated each other a little less. I loved it. I also loved reading Troy's reactions to everything; that was pretty funny.
ersy 6/7/08 . chapter 1
update
wethedreamers 6/7/08 . chapter 1
Loved it; way sweet and amusing...

I liked the beginning, unique and creative.
xox-Daizy
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