I absolutely love this story!!
The relationship between Susan and Peter is wonderful to read.
Your writing is incredible.
I am begging you to continue writing this.

Wow! That was amazing! Please update now!

Absolutely LOVED this story/ one-shots :DD



...Especially the strong bond between Peter & Susan...&& the meaning behind every kiss :)

I loved this chapter!
Please update soon!!
:)

Appendicitis sounds such a trivial thing here, yet in Narnia it will be a dangerous disease. Nice how the insecurities and differences between them are finally resolved by Aslan (who else?)

Of course now everything has fallen into place again. Indeed the topic of them growing up in Narnia with all the ramifications of that needs to be explored at greater detail.

A well-written chapter again, but a bit out of touch with the overall motto of the fic - what happened to that last line?

"I swear to Aslan, if you die, I will never forgive you.”

Perfectly beautiful as always. I look foward to more!

oh how i love this story! I'm so glad you updated! More please

I loved it! more...

Ohh, that was great, Aslan is so... holy!

That was awesome!

Yeah, it's me. Okay, freaking goosebumps. I mean I get every chapter but seriously? This one just totally did me in. Fantastic. The bit about never forgiving her made me laugh. It's just...awesome!

Just two words - SO SWEET! Im so glad to see a Peter/Susan story that has no incest. Keep uo da gud work!

This chapter in particular was awesome; the rest of course is great! I love rogues of princes trying to court Susan and Lucy and Peter and Edmund standing up to them. This is like that idea on crack (I mean that in the best way!)