awsome u are going to write some more are't u?

Ooh...what is the grand plan I wonder? Can't wait for more! update soon!

that was a really good chap

want pink dress!

That was a really good story.

I liked it^^. Hope to read more soon

you referenced kill bill, you are amazing!

Like the pokemon part was funny lol Tho poor Cloudy. But seriously has he really looked himself in the mirror? Cloudy is super hot! Who's hotter then them too? lol


~Wuv the Playfulness*

Good first chapter. I can't wait till the next.