*jaw drops at your awesomeness* Oh my god! I love this story! It's so touching and beautiful. I love the interaction between everyone and how you have the group 'get along' a the end. The intire thing was so, happy/sad/unifying. I personally liked how you made Crown Clown all child like! I can see totally see him making Allen dance around with him while Mana watched. I guess in a way, Mana gets two sons. I mean he can sorta touch the other so hopefully they can all get along :D
Spectacular job!

nice harmonization. sentient innocence is a little bit of a mindtrip tho.

You fleshed out that chapter so beautifully. Poor Allen, he has so many destinies: the Destroyer of Time, the Transcendent One who will be the next Great General, host of the 14th, destined to die young...but none of them mesh. They will have to kick and fight for dominance. Such a pity something so tawdry as a lawsuit has temporarily stilled Hoshino's voice.

*Falls Out Of Chair* WOW! That was... Creepy, but cool, yet chilling, but happy! I never thought I'd read such irony in one fic before! Pure perfection!

o-oh my god... its so... its perfect... wow... i just... wow... and... WHOA! this is so epically awesome! I had to review it here just to tell how much I am shivering with the pure unrated amazingness that this fic is. :D I cant wait to get into the detailed review on the forum!!

Awesome! You filled a hole in between the battle and the dining hall beautifully. It's cool to imagine that's what actually happened!

I really liked your story, though not some parts. But those are just ideas I mean part of the story so not your fault.(Like how helpless Allen seemed or even more that his innocence looked like him)
anyway good story :)

o... powerful... yet slightly creepy at the same time. So, was Mana actually a Noah, or just related to one, I still haven`t figured that out yet...

Oh, and you`re never too old for dreaming and creativity! (Plus, it`s nice to see someone with some maturity on this site. Their writings tend to be more profound and thoughtful...)

Sque!
I loved it! The way you portrayed Crown Clown was so cool!
If you ever get inspired, please make a sequel! Pretty Please?!
P.S. Mr. Bunny loved it too!
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Wow. This was really well done... I got pretty excited reading it.. Heehee.. And it's cool how you made Crown Clown sound sort of... evil.. (: Good job! ^^

SO wonderful. I bet you could make this more thn a one shot, but it's better this way I think. Another deep story from you, so emotional and touching. I have no other words to describe your mazingness with. Write some more soon!

You know, I love your writing. I really love your Allen and Mana, and now I can add Allen's Innocent to the list. I love how you have pulled the most recent chapter in to the story and still had them work. Truely wonderful. So glad to read your stuff. Though I have allowed Komui get ahead of me, need to get back to that...

OMIGOD! Why isn't this a favorite of yours?! Well, you definitely found someone who likes it! ME! I can't even explain this story to myself I'm still in awe. I'm still trying to digest everything. I'll probably even dream of it later it was so good. It was just... so creative, I'm not sure I could ever come up with something so good. You're work is beautiful. I liked- no, loved the beginning, middle, and end. Wonderful, just lovely, just great. Wow. Amazing job you did. Thank you for posting this. d-(^_-)z

good work! Mana is so nicely made.

Aw, another great angst filled one-shot. I was so excited to see a new story from you when I got on the computer~ Poor Alan, he seems to not be able to do anything in this fic, with just his innocence and Mana pulling him back and forth.

:3 Thank you for posting it!