Hey great story! Well; so far. Go sarramaks!!

good chapter

God. I read this after the season finale. How I wish things were different.

You did a great job. Really well done. I look forward to more in the future.

Wow. This was an awesome story. I like totally read the entire thing in one day. You had me biting my nails the entire time. I applaud your descriptions and language use. It was spot on. I loved every single bit. I hope you plan on writing more in the future.

-Andie

wow, you are an incredible story teller. You weaved so many plotlines and interlaced so many characters into this wonderful story that I couldn't tear myself away. I absolutely loved it! You have to write somethin else assoon as possible, you kickass!!

ok so i was gonna save all my comments for when i finished the entire story, but i couldn't hold it in anymore. I love it! This is one of the rare stories that has me completely captivated with not only the romance part but the crime part as well. I mean you are just an incredible writer, I'm sure alot of research went into formulating this plot so carefully and the crime/cult angle is brilliant. It draws the reader in, especially making it suspenseful and frustrating b/c the reader knows what the bad guys are up to. Also, I really enjoy the beginning parts, where you describe the theme of the chapter basically, it really fits with the story and is beautifully written. You are incredible!! Good Job :)

Yana

Thank you very much for the thanks :D You're welcome, and of course! I may ask for the favour to be returned also :P It's been a pleasure, and as i've said to you, I'm both happy that you've finished the story (as I hate an unfinished story) and sad that it has come to an end as it's been a fantastic read. I think you've combined case, characters and relationships excellently. It's been a gripping story throughout, and I think you've woven a subtle thread of imagery throughout of light and dark, and all shades in between. I could be a little predictable in this chapter, and choose the Mac and Stella scene as my faovurite, but actually, as much as i love that, and how you've written them throughout the story, I liked the whole of this chapter and couldn't pick a favourite. The last few chapter in particular have been excellent in terms of pace, action and how the story has drawn together. I liked how oyu reconciled Danny and Lindsay; how you gave possibilities to Mac and Stella; how you wrote Flack and Jess at the start of something and then finally, with a bittersweet note, Elior finding some kind of peace. The last line was wonderful. Affirming without being cliched. I've really liked espcially throughout the story the characters of your own that have really stood out such as Elior. Also great has been Flack and Jess and allthe things between them such as Flack's intensity here, and the little detail of the sheets, and also Jess's wish not to be looked after. So overall, excellent, thank you for writing it :D

Oh wow that whole chapter was breath taking the end was beautiful and the little D/L and SMACKED moments in there were perfect the Jess and don bit was amazing and the last word life made me smile so much i loved this and can't wait to hear more from you i cant believe its over :(

What a fantastic ending! This was a great story from start to finish. You managed to weave an intriguing case with relationships at all stages. I really enjoyed it - I think we need more Flack / Angell, so I particularly enjoyed that. Great job! You should be proud of this!

I've been following this story for months. And now that it's concluded, I just wanted you to know that it was amazing. Simply amazing. I eagerly anticipated each new chapter, and was very sad to watch the story end, though I knew that it would end at some point.

I really hope that you continue to write, and I can't wait to read your next story!

Wow, that was an amazing story. In the past i haven't bothered with Flack/angell stories but yours are so well written. I look forward to many more tales from you in the future.

what a perfect ending. I loved all 23 chapters!

Amazing.

Lovely chapter! A great ending to a wonderful story. It was sweet to see Danny and Lindsay reconcile and I loved the scene with Don and Jess.

Thank you for sharing this fic! I can't wait to see what you write next. :D

Oh that was brilliant and everything is good Jess ain't dead but Rachael nearly is good on you Stella! i love it very well wrote and i liked all the similies :) please update soon i also like Stella's driving technique