Update soon it's great.

A very interesting chapter!

I have enjoyed this chapter today. Keep smiling. :-)

OMG i love the story! Will toby sit in the thrown? Will the goblin king win the heart of the fair maiden? Will ludo smell like the boes? must know!author write faster, fading away into nothing ness! o wait wrong never ending story o.O

Ok, I'm happy again. I like the twist of bringing Toby back in.
Keep it up!

:'(. Not Happy

You cruel person! I like this chapter alot. I think it's because she get's in a fight with Jareth. That is wonderful!

I'm liking this. Very good!

Reply to Eclectic Me:

Good question! I honestly didn't think about it until I finished writing the chapter and was proofreading, but then I came to the conclusion that Sarah is a reader and might have come across a survival guide at some point. Or perhaps she was just extremely lucky in her choices...

... however, the omelet's ingredients haven't had sufficient time to have any kind of effect yet, have they? ;)

Ooh, the fieries, I love those guys! I mean, they're not actually evil, just mischeivious..and kinda dense. But yeah, how many times do I have to tell fantacy characters in my mind not to say things like that? lol
One question I have for you. That was a very cute scene between Sarah and Jareth in the beginning, but where on earth..or in the underground..did Sarah get the makings for an omelet? I mean, I'm sure eggs and mushrooms of some variety can be found in the woods, but how would someone inexperienced know if they were safe, or where to look?
Can't wait to read more!

Jareth is a tricky little blighter... giving Toby an easy way back so that maybe Sarah would return as well. the last line of the chapter is great I love it ... gave me a good chuckle. So Hoggle only JUST figured out that Jareth is in love with Sarah? I mean there were enough clues. The whole laberynth thing the Peach, the mopping after she left. PELASE P{ELASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
~ALANNA~

Interesting. and pleasant chapter. Thanks for sharing. Keep smiling. :-)

Ha ha ha ha: "Why is the rum gone?"
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love it so much

This is a very interesting chapter!