Wow, the fluff! But it was pretty well written and I always appreciate it when characters are kep in-character.

Not bad! You're really good! There are just two things I need to point out. You did a nice job spelling the japanese! There was only one little detail you missed, Arigatou is spelled with a u at the end. Not bad though! I made that mistake too once or twice. Also, in japanese, they say aishitieru, which is japanese for I love you. You did great and I hope you keep up the good work!

It is simple, but cute; a good combination. And funny too!! All my stories I submit (one, actually) don't make sense at all, but I like this one.

Aww, this was so cute! ^^ I love it.

AWWWW how sweeeet that was soo cute...i give ths a rating of four stars out of 5 !!!!! this is great!!! make more more more!!!

EEEEEEEEKKKKKKKK!!!!!! ^______________^
So cyoot!!!!!! GirlAnime please do some more with the Evolution fics^^ I absolutely loved the games and hope great writers like you continue to push out quality fics. ^^

I love sap like this! Pure M+L! I hope you write a sequal! (If you already have, I havent read it) I love romantic stuff like this! Please keep writing!

Toxic shade

WOWW~!!! SOO SOO SOOO CUTE~~!!! HOEEEEEEEE (runs around crazy) GOOD JOB~ (two thumbs up) ^_^

Blackhole: LOVED IT! LOVED IT!
Nova: KAWAII!!!

awwwwwww.
that was so sweet... ::wipes her eyes:: ^_^

Great story, I wonder if you're writing more chapters to it...