this was ssoo good.

wow that was like poetry it was soo good. I am really stunned like u r so amazing

THAT MIKE NEWTON KID IS CRAZY!

wow, that brought me to wish that mike had a chance too. i'm a jacob supporter. i love bella and edward together, but man now i'm thinking, poor mike. darn you bella for having these guys wanting you. nice. i like.

Excellent

man, now i can't hate mike like i used too! or, well, i never really hated him. it kinda pisses me off when people make him seem way worse then he actually is, he's not that bad. but this makes me feel really bad for him. i'm glad you wrote this, no one really thinks about how mike feels about their relationship.

Excellent POV, very Mike-ish. HAHAHA! Well Mikey-Mike, you may not like BEDward, but everybody else does.

Great writing, I love it! Very different from the usual stuff getting uploaded on here.

-Deidara's Model

It's sad how Mike sorta just got shut out from the story... T.T