Sweet!

Aww...

WOAH!

This actually made me cry, this is brilliant! :'D

Ok wow, I love this story, it is such an awesome idea, and it rocks.

I really liked this story :)

i love it

beautiful, thank you

Aww, lovely - great job, I love the idea and the execution, both!

Wow, this is a good idea-I didn't really remember the time gap between the two stories but this makes it work.

This is brilliant.

Very original and well written, I didn't want to it to end. Even though the end was my favorite part. Keep up the good work.

Hmm...

This made me think.

N'yaw.

I like the twist at the end.

I liked that, it was a twist that no one else ever really thought of.

Every time I read this a shiver goes through me. There is something very effective about it - you convey a lot with a few words. And the words are well-placed. Everything about this is perfect and the 'leap' you took was creative and actually worked.

I especially adore the last section, and can only apologise for not having reviewed this before, when I favourited it. Suffice it to say I think this is an amazing story.

One thing: is the 'T' after '4.' there deliberately, or is it a mistake? It just seemed a bit out of place.

Other than that, I honestly have no criticisms. This is stunning.

SO good

havent read a published book as moving as that in ages, you are an awesome writer!

keep writing and maybe add more chapters to that?

i dunno :)

but congrats, real good story :D

SO CUTE!