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| OneAznDragon 2008-09-03 ch 1, | abusedamn good ending! I'm sure now that it'll be in almost every other naruto fanfic out there as a new jutsu for naruto to do |
| Djinn Crimsora 2008-08-26 ch 1, | abuseGAH! NO FAIR! ...I wanted an illustrated ending where Sasuke gets his come'uppins. But nonetheless, very good with this story. |
| Backfire 2008-08-26 ch 1, | abuseAwesome Sauce |
| - 2008-08-25 ch 1, anon. | abuse*laughs* Very amusing! |
| gaul1 2008-08-21 ch 1, | abusenice story, byes |
| demonicnargles 2008-08-19 ch 1, | abuseWonderful! Stunning! Imaginative! Creative! And it was really fun to read. Naruto is so in character here, and everything was logical and made sense. Grammar and spelling were perfect. It was very good. I loved it. -demonicnargles |
| reighost 2008-08-16 ch 1, | abuse"the fuinjutsu equivalent of a “kick-me” sign" ... love it, completely brilliant! |
| Artendome 2008-08-14 ch 1, | abuseNice. |
| Reinju 2008-08-09 ch 1, | abuseOn a list of the most amazingly awesome endings ever, that one would be pretty up there, it's a hell of a way to finish a fight. |
| BeLuke 2008-08-09 ch 1, | abuseThis Naruto story is funny, shows Naruto's skill set in a positive light and makes him out to be something else apart from an incredibly lucky carefree stupid f_c_tard of a ninja. Congratulations on achieving something thought impossible, a decent Naruto! And a decent ending too! I can't wait to see your next work? BeLuke |
| Seerss 2008-08-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is awesome. Simply awesome. |
| Neccor 2008-08-07 ch 1, | abuseTypical naruto fashion to take something he sucks at and make it better just so he can use it. Well done |
| Reader-of-Many 2008-08-07 ch 1, | abuseWhoa, sweetness. haha nice! I like the ideas here, I might use them or something haha. |
| Philzpilz 2008-08-06 ch 1, | abuseHa, fantastic |
| KL 2008-08-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat. You are a genius. To bad, Kishi can't let Naruto think like this... |