im glad to see that there are authors out there that see the darker side of the turks

usually some people try it out and either it leaves a bad taste in their mouth that forces some readers to turn away, or they by-pass that completely

im glad you did neither!

the entire story is so full of control that it goes to my own image of rufus... a cold, cunning bastard with so much control it's kind of freaky and gets whatever he wants...

reminds me of 'dance of the macabre' if you're a fan of this couple and don't mind reading something a little longer, look that up...

this scene reminds me of the scene in the office where rufus forces reno to do his biddin (you'll get what i mean if you read it
sorry for the long review

but truly amazing!

going to check out the rest of your stories now D

Oh my... that was amazing _ I really liked the distinct lack of all things fluffy and cute... which really isn't fitting for stories like these! Great job!

enthralling. good job on capturing the dangerous edge there.

Whoa!

O.o

I am seriously in awe. This is FANTASTIC. I have never read a story that captures my own image of the darker side of the Turks than this does.

Your use of words and the building of the imagery is flawless, and I am honestly in love with it.

Fantastic work!

Interesting, interesting. I am not going to lie and say that I completly understood what was happening. I didn't. But that didn't matter, it was still an interesting take on the two characters and their personalities:D

I'm still new to this fandom, but I do know a good story when I see one...this was the first RufusReno fic I read (i read it a few weeks ago and forgot to review;). Now most others pale in comparision and I find 'em hard to read. in a word: great job (okay two words)

Fitting title

The scenes in this are dark enough on their own, but seeing them through Rufus's eyes made them all the more chilling. It all fit together so well. I really loved how it all boiled down to control, even posession.

THANK YOU Heather Cat for making TP write this. I'm so happy to have it here. Rufus' voice is chilling unapologetic and slightly more than a little sociopathic without being campy or the MWA HAA HA evil villain a lot of people write. He's the bad guy because he doesn't care to apologize it's all about him.