Reviews for Her Childs Lullaby

VampireNaomi 2008-06-11 ch 1,	abuseOh, wow. I think this is by far your strongest piece of writing yet. Her anger, disappointment, thirst for revenge, all of these emotions are really evident in the writing. Your plot idea was also intriguing and the way you handled this was very believable. I can easily see Monty do something like that for power. I think you should continue this one day, either as a sequel to the Monkey Love series or as a stand-alone. This has lots of potential.
Dragon-Girl-Begins777 2008-06-10 ch 1,	abuseDark
HotarutheChainMaster 2008-06-08 ch 1,	abuseWow, I really liked that! Except...you made me mad at Monty >.< Monty, how are you! Hehe, can I rough him up a bit...please? Lol jk! Awesome one-shot!
MrNielsen 2008-06-08 ch 1,	abuseYou should this into one story, maybe a sequel to "Monkey Love II" when the vengeful son turn up on Monty and Nukpanas doorstep to carry destroy their happiness.
PengyChan 2008-06-07 ch 1,	abuseWow, I had never met anyone else who knew "Mordred's lullaby". It's a morbid and addicting song, indeed XD You had a really interesting idea: Monty is just the kind of guy to use people to obtain what he wants, no matter what, but looks like his own actions are going to work against him thise time - hell hath no fury like a woman scorned XD It works well as a one-shot, but it could also be the premise to an extremely interesting story, so let me know if you'll ever decide to go on ^^