Over the past week or so I've read most of your 206 stories (summer break is a wondrous thing), and I have to say that you are an excellent writer. I love the way you capture the relationships between everyone. They are friends, comrades, allies, and lovers.
Thank you for giving me many hours of enjoyable reading, and I hope you continue to write SG:A.

This was a very well written and intersting take on a SGA replicator story. I enjoyed reading this and was glad there was a closing chapter but as a Sheyla fan, I hated this line, "They were team-mates and good friends. They made a good partnership. That was enough."

If you're going to state it's a John S & Ronon D story at least have Ronon in the story, a paragraph at the start isn't really much, it should have been a Sheppard & Teyla story.


Good story well written, apart from the Ronon remark I enjoyed it.

That was an intriguing take on replicator nature.
Did I really pester? I thought I merely 'whined and cajoled'! ;-D
I can't believe you're posting more of These Wings, Taken. Really? Yay!

Is this complete somewhere else? I daren't start reading it, as I know I'll get myself hooked like I did with 'These Wings, Taken'. Let me know if you get a chance. Best!

Where do you get such amazing ideas? I only wish I could tap in to them. What another great chapter with such depth and the action was exceptionally good.

O.O Oh Thank's god XD
The replicator is one good friend not exactly a friend

Thank you for maintaining the rhythm of history =^.^=

This can't be good! Loved those John and Teyla moments too.

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG ah REPLICATOR?!
NO O.O
Great chapter i'm surprised really =^.^=

I was not expecting that! well done, that was a real suprise

Okay, I TOTALLY wasn't expecting that!

Loving this story. Great characterizing of John and Teyla. Good twist in the end. Look forward to more.

OMG OMG OMG! we are humming along with this challenge, quietly agreeing with John about not enough information before being the rat in the maze. And loving the trust of John in Teyla, and John becoming sensitive to Teyla's touch... and BAM! REPLICATOR?! OMG OMG OMG! More now please.

Thats an interesting twist to the story!:D

Holy crap! That's an evil and totally unexpected cliffhanger!! Ack!!

Am really enjoying this story so far. It's intruiging and there's a palpable sense of frustration and we try along with John to work out what is happening here and why. Your characterisation of both John and Teyla is, as ever, excellent.