Wow. Just wow. I thought the damned soul being tortured at the beginning was Dean and then maybe Satan was Dean. Who Satan and the Keeper really were surprised me, happily so. Always knew God had a twisted sense of humour...beyond the platypus and naked mole rat that is.

Really a great, great story. Well thought out and you caught both of the boys' voices perfectly.

That was...wow. Awesome. Totally turned out to be different than I thought it would be. I thought I knew who Dean was in the beginning, boy was I wrong! Poor Sam, finding out who it's been he was praying to all these years. Then the deal he was forced to make? O_O I don't blame him for wanting to be done with hunting. The scene with Dean sorting out the trunk of the Impala was so believable. Once he sets his mind on something, he gets right down to business. Then the last scene by the fire. My jaw dropped and my eyes started tearing up. Shows just how much Dean loves Sammy. Yes, they really have paid too much. Bravo.

Holy crap, that was awesome. I totally love this story. Way to tell a tale of woe. In a sense, it was heartwarming. Weird, eh? I really love it. Gotta read more of your stuff. Thumbs up.

Good grief. That was...disturbing. And amazing, too. Seriously, wow. Loved your version of hell and your take on God. Very original. Well done!

oh wow, loved it. sam as satan for so long, and remembering it. yeah, totally needs a rest from hunting. but now he's got dean to look out for him again. thanks!

That was an awesome story, I've never read anything like it before.
When I started reading it and not knowing at first who I was reading about was exciting and then gradually discovering what was going on made me smile. You could so see this happening.
Great job.

I understand that people have different perspectives on religion, and I'm usually a pretty big fan of your work, but as a believer I was saddened by your portrayal of someone I look to and love as my God. Just FYI. :)

Haunting, exquisitely written...Love the idea of Sam's prayers being heard, just not in the way he expected. And the ending was very powerful; Dean officially putting an end to his family's cycle of tragedy and sacrifice. I hope the boys find a bit of happiness at last!