hey its amazing and i love it but just one thing

i dont wanna be mean but theyre both meant to be first years in the duel so they wouldnt know many spells like sectumsempra and silencio

other than that i think its f a n t a s t i c

oh my god!! that is so terrible of those people! do they have no respect! poor teddy and lupin and tonks! they don't deserve that! poor teddy!! i was almost crying poor him it was so sad, that poor poor boy!! he is so right though, they did die because idiots thought that some people aren't worthy. descrimination is a two way street, you can be a slytherin descriminating a gryffindor or a muggle born just because of what they are or a gryffindor hating a slytherin just because they are one. God i hope you made umbridge and skeeter pay for that!! great story by the way(i really mean it).

ok question, in one of the previous chap. u mentioned someone named dominique or something. who is she?

and where is albus? harry's other son?

Might I just add that though Ron is an auror, in the end of the 7th book Neville was said to be a professor? I am really enjoying reading your stor, it is very creative.

Oh no, what's wrong with Vic?? This is really good compared to some things I've read. PLease update!

I love this story so far. Your writing and characterization are brilliant, and the post-war issues are handled slowly and gradually. I hope we find out what's wrong with Victoire. It's also chilling to think that the war "never really ends" (with the new generation of Slytherin antagonists...though I hope not all of them are bad.)

Uh short... and poor Victoire, I kind of hoped she would be better this chap...
Hope you'll write again soon!

This has been interesting to read. Have a good day tomorrow. Keep smiling. :-)

Wow. I'm not really sure what to make of these last few chapters. At first this story seemed like it would be happy, but then it started taking a more solemn tone. I'm not complaining -- your writing is brilliant and the emotions are so real. I'd just like to see a happy ending, perhaps.

Wow this is getting good! I'm interested to see what will happen! Thanks for the update!

great story!!
but don't really understand what is happening to vic
but i ques that i have to wait for the next chap:P
x chal

Okay...I'm not exactly sure when, where, or what's going on with this. But that may be the point. Anyway, my point is that this chapter doesn't make sense at all. Which may have been your point. I'm going in circles with this review.

Hey. I just wanted to say that I really like your story. Good job and I can't wait for more.

update soon

Wow! That was some potion!

So teddy is permanently scarred. No-one seemed overly concerned about that, not even teddy. Does he think it is cool becaus ehis dad was covered in scars? Bit sad that. And does Teddy now have to have the new potion because he is now a werewolf, or was it a one-off transformation.

And what happened to the two Slytherins who perpetrated this heinous act. Detention?