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Gijinka Renamon
2009-04-20 . chapter 12
Looks good so far, I especially like your casting choices. Can't wait to see more!
Essteka
2009-04-14 . chapter 12
Alright! The chapter I've been waiting for a while: Goofy's introduction! You did quite a good job with this character, as well as with Daisy. And Mortimer's appearance here was nice. I also liked the parts where the characters were looking at the readers. For some reasons, these parts reminds me of the Paper Mario series.

Well, update soon!
Tomahawk41
2009-04-14 . chapter 12
Good to see yet another chapter of this story, NL! I gotta admit, this was a great blend of humor and action; and I really enjoyed the way you cameo'd Fu Dog, you nailed him squarely.

The way you inserted Daisy as...well...Daisy...was also really clever, though to be honest, I didn't think she'd get kidnapped. Ah well, I'm sure it's for a good purpose.

Definately can't wait to see the next chapter; keep it up!
shrekyardigans
2009-04-05 . chapter 1
Is it Ben 10 Alien Force or the original Ben 10 series?
Essteka
2009-02-07 . chapter 11
First, nice title for this chapter (huge fan of that TV show). Second, I liked Mortimer's performance as Waluigi. It was very original to have the guy playing Waluigi trying to get the one in the Luigi role instead of the guy playing Wario. I also liked the references to Kingdom Hearts, especially when Donald thought he was "going on an annoyingly long journey to save a bunch of worlds with a prepubescent teenager with spiky hair" and sighed in relief. Good appearance of Gatomon in this story as well. Also, judging by Mickey's letter, I guess Daisy Duck will make an appearance in the story as Nintendo's Daisy. Overall, excellent job with the humour, the action and the characters (especially with Donald).

Well, update soon!
nobodiez
2009-02-07 . chapter 11
ha another great chapter, too,
bloo:aaww man, i thought i get to see scrooge,his 3 nefews, and launch pad in,
max:well you can't
bloo kick him in the shins
Tomahawk41
2009-02-07 . chapter 11
Hey, don't worry about the length of the chapter, my friend; it was still extremely interesting! The references you pulled in here were very tight and well-done (especially the title, Ducktales FTW!). But I have to say, the way you implimented Mortimer, Kevin, and Gatomon into the chapter REALLY impressed me. It's awesome how you had Mortimer go after Donald instead of Pete, and Gatomon's distractions were priceless; especially how she nailed Mortimer clear in the face, that was hilarious! I'm tellin' ya, this is truely getting to be a cut above most other Subspace Emissary stories!

Keep it up!
nobodiez
2009-01-29 . chapter 10
another good story, very orginal and very funny too, hell boy didn't see that coming
eddy:ah man i wanted to see what happen when the aang gang met gwen
sokka:there so many joke i could have use in this story, now i never get to tell them, and i train my wolf tale off to be in this story,
tak:i know how you feel
me:don't worry i take you guys to get a cold one, and i use you guys in my subspace story
Tomahawk41
2009-01-29 . chapter 10
Yes! This was exactly what I was expecting...yet at the same time, it wasn't :D. I knew that Abe, Hellboy, and Gwen were going to appear, but I NEVER expected Biyomon and Hawkmon; that really took me by surprise. Either way, the action was tight and well-executed; Hellboy's entrance was badass, I must say.

Now I'm REALLY starting to get into this story, NL! Keep it up!
Essteka
2009-01-29 . chapter 10
I don't mind the change at all. I like Hellboy, even though I still didn't see his movies yet or read any of his comic books yet as well. I just like comic book characters of any kind. Anyway, that was a great chapter. I liked the way Hellboy was introduced at the end of the chapter. Good choice for Plusle and Minun. I also liked the 'NOT FUNNY references' part as well. That was pretty good! Also, good job with the characters and the action, as usual.

Well, update soon!
Tomahawk41
2009-01-27 . chapter 9
Wow, you're really going to work on this story, NL, I'm impressed! And this chapter was very well-done, the action and dialogue was great; I don't recall Tentomon using the Final Spin in the Digimon anime, but if it never appeared, that was a nice touch. The references to the Pokemon vs. Digimon war were also very good, I couldn't help but chuckle a bit at those.

Now I'm definately eager to see what you have for the next chapter! Keep it up!
Essteka
2009-01-27 . chapter 9
Pretty good job! I'm glad to see you decided to change Tak for Dexter, mostly because I DID watched Dexter's Laboratory while Tak's show never aired here in Quebec. I liked the part where Bubbles called Tentomon a flippin' rip-off of Pokemon. Hilarious! Same thing with the part where Tai groaned about the fact no one wanted to play the Pokemon Trainer. In addition, I like the fact that Tai ACTUALLY did something of his own instead of ordering a Digimon to do it. That was an excellent move. As for Dee Dee, you used her VERY well. About her Final Smash, I think it's because she became a giant once in a episode of Dexter's show, but it's been a while since I saw it, so I'm not sure. Overall, it was quite a good chapter.

Well, update soon!
nobodiez
2009-01-27 . chapter 9
well that was another orginal chapter, good work, the for dee dee to go giantess cool, and another digimon ripoff of pokemon joke
tak:but now dexter is now olimar, man i wanted that job
me:who know maybe NL will use you in another charater
Darth Ben Valor
2009-01-26 . chapter 8
LOL! That was a very clever chapter. You really kept Jay and Silent Bob in character! :D

And the original subplot was brilliant. Keep it up, dude. ;)
Essteka
2009-01-26 . chapter 8
And so begins the first major plot twist in this story. All I have to say is WOW! That was surely a great chapter!

Okay, honestly, the only Kevin Smith movie I've seen so far is Jay and Silent Bob Strike Back. So, I didn't know the other View Askewniverse characters, but they were quite hilarious in this chapter. But they weren't as hilarious as Jay and Silent Bob themselves! You used them very well and was able to make a lot of good references to their universe as well: Bluntman and Chronic, the George Lucas line, Silent Bob being more intelligent than he appears... All was good! I also like the jokes made on the fanfiction communities such as the fangirls, the yaoi, etc. The (BLEEP!) being used to censore Jay's swearing was a good addition as well! I should have used that for the South Park characters in my version. Oh, well. I won't do that since I don't want to steal any of your ideas.

The only criticism I have to say is that you should make more descriptions. I mean, when Blossom, Dante and Randall appeared, you only said their names. You didn't say how they look like. I had to check on Wikipedia to see what Dante and Randall look like. Sure, they were only here for a cameo, but you could have at least describe how Blossom look like, since she's among the heroes who are there to stop this invasion. As for Jay and Silent Bob, you described how their heads look like, but you didn't describe their clothes enough (except maybe for Silent Bob), as well as their superhero costumes. If they wear different clothes in the Kevin Smith movies, then just put on them some clothes that would make them at least recognizable and in-characters for them.

Well, looks like "WOW!" wasn't the only thing I had to say. Anyway, that's pretty much what I have to say for this chapter. Only one more thing: Well, update soon!
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